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lulu_lizzrd, I think that your poem whould sound less repetitive if you made it something like: Sing a song that opens your heart Dance a dance that 'wakens your eyes ...

Incandescence, I think you are the best writer on this site. The poems I read in my Norton Anthology Of Poetry are about how 'anyone lived in a pretty how ...

ConorR, I didn't understand your poem. Also, the words weren't very interesting. Using my thesaurus, I rewrote your poem using words I didn't know. Mine sounds like a spell. The ...

cathy,I didn't understand the punctuation. In the last stanza, the line about the ocean did not fit in the poem. The poem is about stars. You could keep the line, ...

Soldier boy jack, When i am bored and don't know what to write, I often stare at something, start with a simile, and continue describing. After I have written something, ...